BLog about art advertising frustration learning about photography process .... and other processes
Sunday, November 7, 2010
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I was thinking alot of my roughs are too wordy... even some of my classmates mentioned that I am still slightly going that route so Iooked up a simple shoe ad for ideas.
Veronica - your biggest problem is that you need to visualize what you want to say - if we are talking about comfortable - interview a few people and find out how the see comfortable - we got clouds, a pillow, prarie green, sheeps skin....then you really have to think how your cliche can relate to your shoe. This is a shoe for the regular woman who wants to be fashionable. 18-40. the stitch in time is the eco friendly and the saves nine is the fact that they are fashionable. Or visa versa. You need to really try and formulate you ideas around an image of what you think is fasionable what is comfortable and what is eco: GOOD LUCK YOU CAN DO IT anglea
Veronica - your biggest problem is that you need to visualize what you want to say - if we are talking about comfortable - interview a few people and find out how the see comfortable - we got clouds, a pillow, prarie green, sheeps skin....then you really have to think how your cliche can relate to your shoe. This is a shoe for the regular woman who wants to be fashionable. 18-40. the stitch in time is the eco friendly and the saves nine is the fact that they are fashionable. Or visa versa. You need to really try and formulate you ideas around an image of what you think is fasionable what is comfortable and what is eco: GOOD LUCK YOU CAN DO IT
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